Forget me not's day dream

[tashii]

Before you look at the image I want you to judge it off the following Critiria.

2*Character - 1 mark for the appearance (likeness to the character(s)) and 1 mark for the expression of the character(s)
5* 1 Mark towards lineart (cleanliness, complexity); 1.5 marks to the painting (harmony, choice of colour, cleanliness); 1.5 marks to attention to detail (interaction of elements), 1 mark to technicality/execution (match skill/technique)
2*Foundation and Fundamentals; Anatomy of the characters gets 1 mark and the colour gets 1 mark.
Theme receives 1 mark.
The theme is Forget me not Flowers.
meaning: Faithful love; Undying hope; Memories; Do not forget; True love

Here they are:


Please be critical. This is for a fan art contest I am in.

[Demeter]

love the coloring - love the theme
there's only some slight anatomy issues that I can see - Flora's neck looks a little too thick, her hair's not too fluffy like it's seen in that pose, stomach could be a little thinner.

I'm not sure what could be changed on Helia, maybe a seam on his pant, uh, there ::points under his shirt:: a seam of some fashion. Maybe a little thinner in the chest

[eudora]

I was looking at pictures of his ensomble and Does he have seams on his pants? I did not see any on the images I looked at.

lol: I can't draw skinny people with out thinking that they are annorexic. That's as skinny as I will go.

Flora's neck is to big. Does her hair give the apperance of being pulled back into a single pony tail?

How well do you think it fits the theme?

[Demeter]

dunno about the hair XD I'll throw a scrunchie on one of my Flora's and scan her in a pose similiar to the one Flora's in and send it to you

considering Forget me nots is about memories - and Helia (nearly called him in Sky XD) is remembering Flora, it fits

[meriditha]

Sky? Well we know where your mind is.

[Demeter]

XD
yes, yes, we all know

I'm so bad ;D

[meriditha]

Shh..... Don't admit it to loaud it is more entertaining when it pops out of no where.

[Demeter]

admit what?